Well today on the eve of mothers day... i thought of wishing my mother by reciting my own composed poem... although i am naive in the field of poem writing .. i personnaly feel that i have done a good job (hopefully)...... i would be glad if you guys could have a glance and give me feedback.....

Mother

When you’re looking down, with a scorn
Even the moons cycloptic eye is, blinking with adorn
Nothing in the world seems right
When ur mother is not beside

The feeling of completeness is imperceptible
I could wander all over the continent
Receive all the awards and become preeminent
But still my heart would be with my mother, which is very immanent

This unconditional love is boundless
Where the treasure in her eyes is no big surprise
She is the beacon of light, even in the darkest nights
When the dark and difficult times, arise

When the world is in its tyranny noise
She prays for the torrent to end, n lets the negativity flow around the river bend
No matter how things r worst
She draws the power from your deepest folds of ur soul
And manifest for you own goal

Oh Lord, you have done ur greatest creation
Even in this nasty world of hatred
U have made love so pervasive, and sacred